It’s my first Friday Fictoneer’s entry! You can read the prompt here: http://rochellewisofffields.wordpress.com/2014/01/29/31-january-2014/
Cricket stumbled into her position on the factory floor. There were piles of bud to seed. It must not go out with seeds in it. The seeds belonged to the factory owners.
Demand was up, up, up. Cricket was down, down, down.
A little wouldn’t hurt.
Cricket smoked to her hearts content. She woke many hours later when it was dark. Everyone was gone.
The ganja had worn off. The sign made sense. No smoking in the factory.
Hope Cricket didn’t have far to walk home and that she wasn’t fired from her job for sleeping on it. 🙂
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I hope so, too. Cricket learned a lot that day.
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some rules are made to be broken but not so for some rules. poor Cricket. welcome to FF and you created a neat scenario.
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Thank you for reading and commenting. I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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What happened to the rules? Great story.
(Heart’s??)
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Thank you. Yes, it should be heart’s. Thank you for pointing that out.
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Thank you. The green haze in the photo and the legalizing of ganja in a few states inspired me.
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Dear Gina,
Welcome to Friday Fictioneers. I learned a new word. Ganja.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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This is a fantastic take on the prompt.
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Thank you.
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This was a very creative story using that prompt. I have to admit I had to look up the word “ganja”.
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Thank you for reading and commenting. I honestly thought that ganja was a more common word than it turned out to be.
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Nice take on the prompt. Sometimes you’ve got to ‘weed’ out the chaff….
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Chuckle. Yes, you do.
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A great story! Cricket has learned quite a bit today! 🙂
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Thank you! I think Cricket has a bright future.
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I didn’t think of that kind of smoking. Now that the ganga is gone, how about a Red Stripe? 🙂
janet
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Cricket is impressed by your taste. Thanks for stopping by.
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Good story – I had to look up ganga too. Glad you’re here. Thanks.
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Thank you. FF is a fun group of talented writers.
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Haha well sounds like Cricket got a nice rest! Cute story 🙂
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Thank you. Cricket did have a nice rest.
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Friday Fictioneers! Love the idea, and your take on the prompt. 🙂
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Thank you! I encourage you to give it a try sometime. It’s a friendly and talented group.
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You’re welcome! I definitely want to participate.
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Cricket sounds like a cute character! This is very nicely done. And oh, welcome to FF, I’ve only written twice for it but I already love it. Watch out, its addictive 🙂
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Writing is my favorite addiction! I plan to participate in FF again and again. Thank you for the visit and for your kind words.
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Gina, the words here flow so wonderfully, like poetry. “Demand was up, up, up. Cricket was down, down, down.” Fantastic!
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Thank you, Dawn! I like it, too.
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It’s such a great feeling when you appreciate your own work. 😀 Are you doing the Prompt this week too?
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I feel that if I don’t like what I write, my chances of someone else not liking it are pretty high.
I’m working on FF this week, getting my novel ready for publication, and a humor poetry contest. Prompt is fun, but not a priority for me right now.
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Oh my! I can’t believe I missed your first foray into Friday Fictioneers. Welcome and well done. The sign was indeed there for a reason though I don’t one could blame her. Though now would be a good time to disappear. I bet the owners will be none to pleased.
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It’s good that you found my first venture in FF. Thanks for taking the time. Cricket may have to pay it back, but a lesson learned makes her a valuable employee.
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And a controllable one. 😉
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I think so. After hours only from now own.
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